Au revoir
I wrote this song during my last days at Loyola.What it is about?Boohoo!!I miss school..
It’s all over now
Reasons are all gone
Silence crept in,Rythm faded away
Clapping of hands came to a still
Heart of the young men were swelling with grief
Why ,Why did the light succumb to darkness
Silence just prevailed over the tempo
Tunes so soothing turned to neverending din
Dry leaves were falling down from the maple trees(Its all..)
We are bidding goodbye..to a wonderful world
And i saw the sparkle in the eyes of the world
Why ,Why did the music stop then
When the tap of the music faded into silence(Its all..)
Dry leaves were falling faster
Sweet memories ,we had in the past
were now wept down to shiny drops
Time was in its slowest role (Its all..)
Different roads we have to tread
I’m No more brave to look back once
Years’ together with all the fun
i’m saying goodbye to a world so dear
(Its all..)
Heruka said,
Wrote on September 7, 2006 @ 2:39 pm
Wait…you write poems?
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Anyway, about the poem…
It is written somewhat unconventionally, isn’t it?
I can understand what you are trying to convey perfectly, though, and in the end, that is all that matters.
said,
Wrote on September 7, 2006 @ 2:45 pm
Hey Heruka,
Thanks for replying.I do write poems..Though the wordsworth in me is really immature.
Prasanth said,
Wrote on September 7, 2006 @ 9:11 pm
wtf? u write poems? now comeon… i wud blieve if u said shijo dances well. u and poetry? naaah!
Ambani said,
Wrote on September 7, 2006 @ 9:46 pm
Kalip Anna,
Honestly, you rock…
This poem(for want of another word) once again brings out the immense amount of talent hidden in your 5′7″ frame! However, technically speaking, your work looks more like a song than a poem. Besides there are a few errors scattered across, like ‘Heart of THE young men…’ & ’sweet memories WERE now swept’. However, I’d like to repeat what Heruka has told. I could feel the searing pain of your heart in every single world…
Keep up the good work!
upwardautodidact said,
Wrote on September 9, 2006 @ 2:24 am
@Ambani
Ya thanx a lot for those words.It is not because i believe what you said…But i appreciate it.And it is a song.Typos are frequent dude.Bear with them..
@Prasanth
You got a problem with me writing songs.And i believe shijo can dance well.(The logic should be correct..That’s all)
Renitha Skaria said,
Wrote on July 18, 2008 @ 2:08 pm
Hello Jacob …
I think the Poe at this time for me is an inspiration and I loved every line of it ..im amazed with the talent you have …its good and keep up the good work !
keep writing more and keep in touch !
All the best for all New ventures in Life !
tc cya