Comments on: Au revoir http://dynz.net/jacob/2006/09/07/au-revoir/ Jacob Thomas's personal weblog Tue, 06 Jan 2009 10:34:33 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.2.1 By: Renitha Skaria http://dynz.net/jacob/2006/09/07/au-revoir/#comment-145 Renitha Skaria Fri, 18 Jul 2008 08:38:34 +0000 http://dynz.net/jacob/2006/09/07/au-revoir/#comment-145 Hello Jacob ... I think the Poe at this time for me is an inspiration and I loved every line of it ..im amazed with the talent you have ...its good and keep up the good work ! keep writing more and keep in touch ! All the best for all New ventures in Life ! tc cya Hello Jacob …

I think the Poe at this time for me is an inspiration and I loved every line of it ..im amazed with the talent you have …its good and keep up the good work !

keep writing more and keep in touch !
All the best for all New ventures in Life !
tc cya

]]> By: upwardautodidact http://dynz.net/jacob/2006/09/07/au-revoir/#comment-27 upwardautodidact Fri, 08 Sep 2006 20:54:11 +0000 http://dynz.net/jacob/2006/09/07/au-revoir/#comment-27 <p>@Ambani<br /> Ya thanx a lot for those words.It is not because i believe what you said...But i appreciate it.And it is a song.Typos are frequent dude.Bear with them..</p> <p>@Prasanth<br /> You got a problem with me writing songs.And i believe shijo can dance well.(The logic should be correct..That's all)</p> @Ambani
Ya thanx a lot for those words.It is not because i believe what you said…But i appreciate it.And it is a song.Typos are frequent dude.Bear with them..

@Prasanth
You got a problem with me writing songs.And i believe shijo can dance well.(The logic should be correct..That’s all)

]]> By: Ambani http://dynz.net/jacob/2006/09/07/au-revoir/#comment-26 Ambani Thu, 07 Sep 2006 16:16:01 +0000 http://dynz.net/jacob/2006/09/07/au-revoir/#comment-26 <p>Kalip Anna,</p> <p>Honestly, you rock...<br /> This poem(for want of another word) once again brings out the immense amount of talent hidden in your 5'7" frame! However, technically speaking, your work looks more like a song than a poem. Besides there are a few errors scattered across, like 'Heart of THE young men...' &#38; 'sweet memories WERE now swept'. However, I'd like to repeat what Heruka has told. I could feel the searing pain of your heart in every single world...</p> <p>Keep up the good work!</p> Kalip Anna,

Honestly, you rock…
This poem(for want of another word) once again brings out the immense amount of talent hidden in your 5′7″ frame! However, technically speaking, your work looks more like a song than a poem. Besides there are a few errors scattered across, like ‘Heart of THE young men…’ &#38; ’sweet memories WERE now swept’. However, I’d like to repeat what Heruka has told. I could feel the searing pain of your heart in every single world…

Keep up the good work!

]]> By: Prasanth http://dynz.net/jacob/2006/09/07/au-revoir/#comment-25 Prasanth Thu, 07 Sep 2006 15:41:40 +0000 http://dynz.net/jacob/2006/09/07/au-revoir/#comment-25 <p>wtf? u write poems? now comeon... i wud blieve if u said shijo dances well. u and poetry? naaah!</p> wtf? u write poems? now comeon… i wud blieve if u said shijo dances well. u and poetry? naaah!

]]> By: <![CDATA[upwardautodidact]]> http://dynz.net/jacob/2006/09/07/au-revoir/#comment-24 Thu, 07 Sep 2006 14:45:36 +0000 http://dynz.net/jacob/2006/09/07/au-revoir/#comment-24 Hey Heruka, Thanks for replying.I do write poems..Though the wordsworth in me is really immature. Hey Heruka,
Thanks for replying.I do write poems..Though the wordsworth in me is really immature.

]]> By: Heruka http://dynz.net/jacob/2006/09/07/au-revoir/#comment-23 Heruka Thu, 07 Sep 2006 09:09:41 +0000 http://dynz.net/jacob/2006/09/07/au-revoir/#comment-23 <p>Wait...you write poems?<br /> ___<br /> Anyway, about the poem...<br /> It is written somewhat unconventionally, isn't it?<br /> I can understand what you are trying to convey perfectly, though, and in the end, that is all that matters.</p> Wait…you write poems?
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Anyway, about the poem…
It is written somewhat unconventionally, isn’t it?
I can understand what you are trying to convey perfectly, though, and in the end, that is all that matters.

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